Reflection

After constructing my Utopia and reading the pros and cons posted by others, I realized how to improve my utopia. My utopia was stress free, fun, and pleasant; as said by most; but it still lacked some. I learned that when I am constructing a Utopia, I shouldn't just think about myself. I found that ironic since a utopia is the perfect world for "you." This utopia, in my eyes, was perfect. But through others' eyes, it wasn't perfect. If I wish to attract more people, I should consider others' life styles, wants, and needs. This is very important in order to get others to join. Next time I will consider what I want keeping that a key factor but still model the society on what others want. Even though it is a __Ut__opia (hence the U), in order to succeed, it can't all be about you.

-Graham Reitz 3rd

After reading the comments that I got, I thought that my partner and I did well. The responses were mostly positive, except we made a few errors in the typing and coloration. The red seemed to put off a lot of people, and one of the typos said, "...a life full of stress..." which was noticed by almost everyone. I learned that I should be careful how I type and make sure to have inviting colors. As Plato would say, " Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." Applying this to the situation, I thought that the colors were good, but to others who viewed it didn't. -Mark Hohertz 3rd and 6th